The graph below shows the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the U.S. from 1995 to 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart shows different kinds of ologies of household proportions in the U.S. over a period of four years, including washing
machine
, computers and so on.
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machines
It is clear that
the five kinds of technologies all basically have a rising trend, while
the washing machine
always been the most popular from 1995 to 1999.
Looking at the information in more detail, the washing Add the auxiliary verb
hasmachine
machine
owned a percentage of 60% in 1996 and rose gradually up to 80% in 1999, has the largest proportion. Similarly
, the figure
for computer
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computers
also
increased steadily from 40% to 70%.
The other three technologies have smaller
account in 1995, which Add an article
a smaller
were
less than 25%, two of them increased: the Correct subject-verb agreement
was
figure
of
Change preposition
for
internet
made up 40% in 1999 and the Add an article
the internet
figure
for phones jumped to 75% after four years. Nevertheless
, DVD players were left in the cold, which only 40% of household
owned in 1999.
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households
Overall
, they were all up on the whole from four years ago, the figure
of
washing Change preposition
for
machine
still has the largest account.Fix the agreement mistake
machines
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