nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of thechnology. in what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? has this become a positive or negative development?

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certainly true that
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altered the methods of
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to communicate. In my opinion,
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negative trend. The first change of
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to make new relationships with
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from various backgrounds ,cultures, and languages.
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diversity, which the opportunities for
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new traditions and help them to see the world from a new angle.
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, Facebook and
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today is the most popular platform to make friends
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relationships very
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can stay in touch with loved ones regardless of
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location. For
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who study or work abroad can make video
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via smartphones with their families and friends ,
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can assist to reduce the feeling of loneliness and
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. In my perspective,
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feel isolated and
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is because they lose face-to-face
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lifestyle.
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changed our way to communicate dramatically we make friends worldwide, and keep in touch with loved ones,
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harmful
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become isolated and
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