certainly true that
technology
altered the methods of
individuals
to communicate. In my opinion,
technology
makeChange the verb form
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our
globallyChange the word
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convenient, and I believe
this
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negative trend.
The first change of
technology
in
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of
peopleChange noun form
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is becomeChange to the active voice
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possible for
people
to make new relationships with
people
from various backgrounds ,cultures, and languages.
This
change can
boostsChange the verb form
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cultureReplace the word
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diversity, which the opportunities for
individuals
to learn
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new traditions and help them to see the world from a new angle.
For instance
, Facebook and
today is the most popular platform to make friends
instead
of
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way .
Secondly
, modern
technology
makeChange the verb form
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relationships very
.
This
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individuals
can stay in touch with loved ones regardless of
geographicallyChange the word
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location. For
,
people
who study or work abroad can make video
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via smartphones with their families and friends ,
this
can assist to reduce the feeling of loneliness and
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.
In my perspective,
this
development can bring
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detrimental impacts
inChange preposition
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individuals
.
Firstly
,
technology
contributes to
makeChange the verb form
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people
feel isolated and
introvertReplace the word
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.
This
is because they lose face-to-face
.
Secondly
,
InteractWrong verb form
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via
or computers encourage
people
to adopt
sedentaryAdd an article
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lifestyle.
Therefore
, they
vulnerableAdd a missing verb
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to
have Unnecessary verb
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serious diseases
such
,
obesityChange preposition
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, heart attack,
cancerCorrect word choice
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.
To sum up
, it seems to me that
technology
changed our way to communicate dramatically we make friends worldwide, and keep in touch with loved ones,
however
,
this
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harmful
including,
people
hasChange the verb form
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become isolated and
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them Correct pronoun usage
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to
inactiveAdd an article
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lifestyle.