The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)

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The line graph presents

an information

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information

a piece of information

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on the cause of

air

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pollution

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the

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apply

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Britain between 1990 and 2005.

This

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chart focuses on

air

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pollution

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originating from transportation, industry, and households.

Overall

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, the graph shows the tendency of several

contanimants

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contaminants

in the UK every three years. In 1990, the factory

peacked

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peeled

at the most emissions and

then

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, it

constiually

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continually

descended for 15 years. Meanwhile, the

trend

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of transportation discharge

slighly

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slightly

ascended. Looking at the detailed data, the data of industry showed a significant

declive

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decline

from around 5.5 to 2.5 between 1990 and 1999 and

then

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slighly

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slightly

dropped.

On the other hand

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hoseholds

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households

maintained the amount of

air

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polluted material at around 1 during the first 9 years with one dip and spik and

then

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, it diminished by almost 0. The part of transportation and household is not an important factor that

lead

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leads

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overall

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air

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pollution

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trend

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. But when looking at the overview

trend

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found that

air

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pollution

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trend

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to decrease.

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,in 2005, it is a low point

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total

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the total

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amount of discharging

air

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contaminants in the

air

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Vocabulary: Replace the words air, pollution, trend with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 4 times.

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5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

179 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

air pollutants
emissions
decrease
increase
stable
fluctuate
trend
peak
drop
significant
legislation
technological advancements
comparative analysis
contributors
households
transport
industry
regulation
pattern
anomaly

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