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Do the advantages of patriotism outweigh its disadvantages?

#patriotism
In
this
 contemporary era, patriotism has a new-found meaning in the world and people have different ways
express
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 it
such
 as chanting, hoisting a flag, or by art. The pros of a nation where the citizens are patriotic surpasses the nations with less
nationalist's
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 population. In
this
 essay, I will outline why I believe being patriotic is advantageous and necessary from an individual and nation's viewpoint. The main reason why
its
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it's
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 beneficial to be country-loving is that it gives a sense of pride to
citizen
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citizens
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 of that country.
Therefore
, encourages them to respect and follow the regulations set forth by the government.
For instance
,
a
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territory where people are loyal, there is less probability of hate crimes and terrorist attacks. Another compelling is that the citizens will show gratitude towards the army, navy, and special forces.
Hence
, they will have a motive to give back to the nation rather than
leaving
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 and going abroad for better opportunities
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 education, employment etc.
Morever
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Moreover
, being patriotic is a quality that an individual
acquire
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 after years of learning and gaining wisdom, which in return
provide
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 him with a feeling of fulfilment and contentedness.
To conclude
, patriotism is a quality that everyone should strive to embed in themselves from a very young age to be able to be a better, country-loving citizen and
overall
 development of their well-being
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