In many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their childen to single-sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single-sex schools have disadvantages later in life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In contemporary society, every parent has plenty of school options available for providing a bedrock for learning. Some parents

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incline

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towards unisex learning institutes.

However

, a fraction of people

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that

gender-specific

colleges can have demerits for youngsters later in life. I agree with

this

statement to some extent

due to

a variety of concerns.

This

essay will expound on both sides of the argument and will provide a conclusion after discussing the demerits and merits of both types of schooling. On the one hand, few parents give priority to single-sex schools

due to

a number of concerns with the

co-education

system

. One major concern related to mixed education is the safety of female

students

For instance

According to

a few research surveys, it is proved that the safety of female

students

is a major concern for their parents

due to

cases of sexual harassment from male figures. Another big reason for selecting a

gender-specific

school is a more comfortable atmosphere in the

gender-specific

institute. As mostly females feel more comfortable and secure in a girls' campus where they can openly discuss their personal issues

such

as menstruation cycle and other illnesses, which can not be discussed openly in a co-learning

system

On the other hand

, few people insist on giving priority to the

co-education

system

due to

various factors.

Firstly

, one of the big factors is a lack of confidence in most of the

students

who belong to

gender-specific

institutions. These

students

don't have enough confidence to express their views with other genders. Most of them can not hold a conversation and can not get attention in front of a large audience.

Moreover

students

who learn in a

co-education

system

have more confidence and interpersonal skills which make them more successful in later stages of life. In conclusion, I vehemently oppose the idea of single-sex educational institutions. In my opinion, the

co-education

system

provides more learning opportunities for youngsters.

Consequently

, the

co-education

system

should be supported by parental figures to provide a better future for the young generation.

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Consider expanding on your introduction with a clearer thesis statement that directly addresses the extent to which you agree or disagree.

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In your conclusion, revisit the key points made throughout the essay to summarize your stance more effectively.

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Ensure a balanced discussion of both views with clear examples before stating your own position.

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Maintain logical sequencing of ideas and paragraphs; transition words or phrases can be used more effectively to create smoother links between ideas.

coherence cohesion

Develop main points with more specific examples or data to strengthen your arguments.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.

Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

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Topic Vocabulary:

single-sex schools
co-educational schools
gender stereotypes
social interaction
communication skills
academic performance
mixed-gender environments
real-world situations
adaptability
diversity and inclusivity
employment expectations

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In many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their childen to single-sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single-sex schools have disadvantages later in life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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