In many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their childen to single-sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single-sex schools have disadvantages later in life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In contemporary society, every parent has plenty of school options available for providing a bedrock for learning. Some parents
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Consider expanding on your introduction with a clearer thesis statement that directly addresses the extent to which you agree or disagree.
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In your conclusion, revisit the key points made throughout the essay to summarize your stance more effectively.
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Ensure a balanced discussion of both views with clear examples before stating your own position.
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Maintain logical sequencing of ideas and paragraphs; transition words or phrases can be used more effectively to create smoother links between ideas.
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Develop main points with more specific examples or data to strengthen your arguments.
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.
Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.
When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.
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- such as
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- take, for example