Some people believe that students work better if the teacher is strict; others think it is better for students, if the teacher has a friendly approach. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

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A few decades earlier

teachers

were cruel to the

children

and they punished them in bad manners. Nowadays

this

habit changed to a good manner and punishments go away. Some believe restricting has merits and others think a friendly connection is worth it for both parties.

This

essay shall look into the benefits of both approaches. Our parents and grandparents have

this

experience,

infact

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in fact

teachers

were very cruel and they use sticks to punish pupils, and they stood up under the Sunlight. The main reason for

that is

, in those days

children

did not understand the value of education and the parents were

also

not educated. To make sense,

teachers

treated them in cruel ways. But the wonder is those

children

still respect their tutors as their gods. The disadvantage of

this

is, some students give up schooling and used

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bad company and

also

drugs,

due to

the reasons that

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they can not face neglection. When we look at the other side, students love behaving with

teachers

as friends. Because friends know each other's ups and downs. Nowadays a friendly school atmosphere become increasingly popular. In

this

,practice both parties can stay happy,

while

doing their studies. Why are we getting so much pressure in our lives

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when we see

children

who walk along the school holding

teachers

' sarees. These practices are very important to make an eternal bond between these two parties. School is the second home to a child. If the home has a harsh environment, they will become astray.

For instance

, I had a friend who was really good at mathematics, one-day the maths teacher blamed her and punished her, the next day she gave up coming to class and now she is going to a garment for sewing.

To conclude

, I reiterate that

teachers

should practice how to make valuable students to society, without crushing

children

's blooming minds.

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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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In conclusion
To conclude
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Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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