The graph below shows the average time spent by four car manufacturers to produce vehicles at their US factories

The graph below shows the average time spent by four car manufacturers to produce vehicles at their US factories
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The graph shows how long
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four particular manufacturers spend producing a single car in their factories located in the US.
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, compared with 1998, all factories spent less
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in 2005 producing
one
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vehicle. At the start of the period, General Motors (GM) used the most
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producing a single motor, with over 32
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, at the same period, Toyota and
Honda
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needed 10
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less, at about 22
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for these two Japanese brands to build
one
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vehicle. With regard to Ford, it cost 28
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in 1998.
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, Toyota and
Honda
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kept at a low
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-consuming rate,
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Honda
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reached the lowest point of 20
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in 1999, which is the fastest record to produce a single auto even in 2005. In contrast, Ford spent 31
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in 2001, 3
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more than in 1998,
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GM kept a declining trend throughout these years.
At the end
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of the period, GM had gotten a great improvement, as it only needed 22
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for
one
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car, compared with 1998, saving 10
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.
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, Ford needed almost 21
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, 1 hour more than Toyota and
Honda
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, which kept in a low
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consuming for
one
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car, both ending around 20
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in 2005.
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