The graph below shows the average time spent by four car manufacturers to produce vehicles at their US factories

The graph below shows the average time spent by four car manufacturers to produce vehicles at their US factories
The graph shows how long
time
four particular manufacturers spend producing a single car in their factories located in the US.
Overall
, compared with 1998, all factories spent less
time
in 2005 producing
one
vehicle. At the start of the period, General Motors (GM) used the most
time
producing a single motor, with over 32
hours
, at the same period, Toyota and
Honda
needed 10
hours
less, at about 22
hours
for these two Japanese brands to build
one
vehicle. With regard to Ford, it cost 28
hours
in 1998.
Thereafter
, Toyota and
Honda
kept at a low
time
-consuming rate,
while
Honda
reached the lowest point of 20
hours
in 1999, which is the fastest record to produce a single auto even in 2005. In contrast, Ford spent 31
hours
in 2001, 3
hours
more than in 1998,
whereas
GM kept a declining trend throughout these years.
At the end
of the period, GM had gotten a great improvement, as it only needed 22
hours
for
one
car, compared with 1998, saving 10
hours
.
Besides
, Ford needed almost 21
hours
, 1 hour more than Toyota and
Honda
, which kept in a low
time
consuming for
one
car, both ending around 20
hours
in 2005.
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