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Some people argue that managers are responsible for the organisation's success, while others think various features of the organisation play a vital role in it. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

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From my own perspective, both statements are true
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managers
 are responsible for the
organization
's success and various aspects affect play a vital role.
However
, I'm leaning towards the
managers
, as an individual asset, as one of the important parts of the organisation.
Firstly
, the
organization
 is about the people. We can't run everything without the people in it. In order to create the system and orchestrate it,
as well as
 the maintenance, humans still play a big part
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this
.
Secondly
, high-level management or we can say
managers
 and above are the decision makers to bring the organizations into a certain state. With that being said, a manager's quality will decide the success of the organisation judged by how they decide and prioritize things.
Last
,
managers
 will be the ones who create the company's culture including the system
as well as
 the values of the
organization
along with
 other top-level management. Attitudes, personalities,
andcommunication
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and communication
style
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 they use on a daily basis in
workspace
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the workspace
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 will be adopted by their subordinates and as time goes by it will become
their
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identitiy
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identity
 that can distinguish them from other organizations.
To sum up
, those three aspects make me believe that an
organization
's success is influenced by the manager and their qualities.
Therefore
, it's important to have top-notch qualified
managers
 around.
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