Pollution of air, water and soil has becom critical in last years. What are the main causes of pollution?

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pollution
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pollution
, noise
pollution
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several
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behind
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mentioned in
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which will be discussed in
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. On the first hand, polluted air has a very big environmental
issue
at
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level
as well as
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.
Furthermore
,
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behind
such
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a problem
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is the
consumtion
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consumption
of non-renewable energy resources in transport
such
as petrol and fuel, which omits
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carbon
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dioxide on
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scale and destruct
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envoirnment
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environment
. Government can overcome
this
issue
by
implimenting
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implementing
strict traffic
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on
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owners of private cars and
transports
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which are old models and exhaust heavy smoke.
In addition
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vehicles. Electric automobiles help a lot in saving
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. On the second hand,
Water
pollution
may stand after air
pollution
, which is very harmful
specialy
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especially
specially
for
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world and for
human kind
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also
.
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, after
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of
electercity
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electricity
from
nuclear
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the
remaing
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remaining
waste is
also
very dangerous for living things.
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,
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of
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nuclear plants,
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is directly dumb into
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and exposed
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water
creatures to high danger. To tackle them, governing bodies of
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countries use alternate energy
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like
water
energy and wind power which are
eco friendly
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.
Although
nuclear power is never ending source
but
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it is
also
threatening.
Thirdly
, Soil is
also
facing lots of issues in current times. Useing of plastic
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materials
are
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perhaps
biggest
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reason behind
this
issue
. These polythene bags can be
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decomposed
decompose
.
Additionally
,
such
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material
ruin the land where
this
material is dumb
also
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deterimental
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on
area
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where they are concealed. To solve
this
problem, ruling bodies can put
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a ban
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on using and manufacturing of
such
bags and they should introduce
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unique bags which can easily
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and eco friendly.
However
, I believe we both
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i.e.
government and
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individuals
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have
same
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reponsibilities
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responsibilities
to put a full stop to discussed above
issue
. In conclusion, environmental issues are facing by humanity
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perhaps
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millions
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of
year
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years
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and
also
try to tackle them. We have to work hard to prevent
theem
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them
at
individual
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the individual
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level
, national
level
and
internatrional
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international
level
as well.
Otherwise
future of planet Earth is under swear danger.
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