The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and Reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in  one country between 1920 and 2019.

Summarise the  information by selecting and Reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts illustrate the details of alterations in ownership of electrical gadgets and time spent doing housework between families in a single nation from 1920 to 2019. It's clear that in
this
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period the proportion of refrigerators increased without stopping,
while
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the amount of time spent on housework decreased bit by bit.
To begin
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with , from 1920 to 2019 the percentage of refrigerators raised rapidly, in 1940 was 58%,
whereas
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in 1960 was 90% and in 1980 was 100%.
Furthermore
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, the percentage of households with vacuum cleaners expanded from 1920 to 2019 with an increase of 20% every 20 years from 30%.
However
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, in
this
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period the percentage of domestics with washing machines enlarged from 40% in 1920 to 75% in 2019 ,
while
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between 1960 and 1980 was declined from 70% to 63%.
In addition
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to
this
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, the amount of time spent on housework per week dropped by decreased from 1920 to 2019
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household appliances
  • time-efficient
  • labour-saving devices
  • technological innovations
  • ownership rate
  • housework chores
  • domestic workload
  • automation
  • advancements
  • trend analysis
  • societal shifts
  • economic impact
  • durability
  • lifespan of appliances
  • maintenance
  • historical comparison
  • time allocation
  • drudgery reduction
  • energy consumption
  • disruption in trends
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