You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. Write 150 words. In your letter: -Explain the important event -Apologize for the situation -Suggest a new arrangement

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Dear Green, Hope you're fine. I've bad news for you. I'm so sorry that I

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be able to make it to Canada next month as planned on the 14th of June as I've to attend my relative's marriage in India on the 20th of June. Since the dates are clashing, I've no option other than to drop my trip to Canada. Yesterday, I happened to hear from my mother about my cousin's marriage in Chennai. As you're aware, the Hindu wedding celebrations take place for two weeks and my grandmother had asked me to attend all the ceremonies. As the wedding is the first family celebration since post-pandemic, it's like a family get-together party and I should be there to attend it. I'm so sorry to disappoint you with

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news. I know, we made a lot of plans to enjoy but I'm so helpless in

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situation and I hope you understand. To make it up, I'll reschedule my airline ticket for July and promise to have an extended stay

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time. Let me know if

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works out for you. Hoping to hear from you soon. Regards, Brown.

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coherence cohesion

Ensure each paragraph has a single clear topic or idea to improve coherence and cohesion.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing are appropriate, but ensure the logical structure and single idea per paragraph are consistent throughout the letter.

task achievement

Your response is well-developed and complete, but pay attention to maintaining a suitable writing tone throughout the letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

191 words

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. !

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