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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year . Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevemt.

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The provided maps depict information about the developments which are planned to take place next year.
Overall
, it is clear from a cursory glance that dramatic changes are expected. The southwest
Airport
 is simple now with 8 gates towards the north. They surround a boxy building. The walkway is situated into that. At the centre of the
Airport
, Security license
control
 and
Passport
control
 customs can be seen. What is more ,
Departures
 and arrivals are towards the north. If you enter the
airport
 by
departures
 , you can see check-in on your left and the cafe on your right. Next year, Radical changes are predicted at the site of the airfield.
Firstly
, the boxy building will be converted into a strange shape and it will be surrounded by 18 gates
instead
 of 8 ones.
Moreover
, a walkway will be removed and
instead
, the sky train is planned to be organized .
Passport
control
 and
Passport
control
 will remain the same as now. Shops will be set up between security
passport
control
 and gate 1.
In addition
, both
departures
 and arrivals will double at the south of the
airport
, next to
departures
 , the cafe will be moved towards the southwest corner .
Besides
, Bag drop and check-in are expected to be below security
passport
control
. Another cafe , ATM and car hire will be towards the east and between
passport
control
 customs and arrivals.
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