The chart below shows the total number of minutes of telephone calls in the UK , divided into three categories, from 1995 to 2002.
The illustrated bar chart represents full-time phone calls in the UK, which split into three groups between 1995-2002.
2001 year. The next time in 1997, it consisted of about 85
Overall
, the highest number of Linking Words
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was in local calls, Use synonyms
while
all mobile calls were the least time in Linking Words
minutes
.
Turning to the details,for 7 years (1995-2002) in a row national and international and all mobile calls were rising up respectively. In the final year (2002) period of national and international were over 60 billion Use synonyms
minutes
(61 approximately), Use synonyms
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mobiles consisted of 45 Add a comma
,however
minutes
(billion).
Returning to the details of local fixed line in Use synonyms
minutes
, in 1995 and 2002 constituted 72 (about). The following year, in 1996 the total number of time was 80 Use synonyms
minutes
in billions, which was at the same rate asUse synonyms
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minutes
in a fixed line, identically to 2000. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, in 1999 period of calls was under 90, Linking Words
while
in 1999 it came to about exactly 90 Linking Words
minutes
in billions, which experienced over 2-3 Use synonyms
minutes
difference respectively.Use synonyms
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