Nowadays many people believe that inspite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. why is this the case? what can be done about this problem?

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Today, we can see that famine is still happening around the world, not only in the countries in Africa but

also

widespread in another land

such

as Asia and Europe.

This

phenomenon keeps happening in spite of there are many advances in technology in agriculture created by humans to increase production.

This

essay aims to investigate the causes of

this

and

also

put forward a number of solutions. In my opinion, war is one of the reasons that causes famine. War causes instability in domestic conditions in one country and destroys the country

along with

all agricultural land.

For example

, the war between Russia and Ukrania has made the civilians go starving because comestibles are not available and become rare items to be found in that countries. These conditions lead to be made people going hungry, in spite that

they

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advanced technology in agriculture.

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0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Nowadays many people believe that inspite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. why is this the case? what can be done about this problem?

Include an introduction and conclusion

In some countries, older people are encouraged to work longer and avoid retirement. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your opinion.

Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. So, sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Should hunting be considered a sport? Do you agree or disagree?

n the future, nobody will buy printers newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything, they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people think that we should use traditional methods to solve our problems, others say that we should use modern methods. Give your opinion and also explain how important is to use new methods.