Some people think that the best way to stay fit is joining a gym or health clubs. While others think That doing everyday activities such as walking or climbing stairs is enough. Discuss both aspects give Your Own opinion

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it is widely acknowledged that gym or daily activities are of significant importance for our health.
However
, some people claim that only daily activities
such
as walking or climbing stairs are enough to keep fit. In my opinion, joining a gym or health club improve body health more than regular activities.
This
essay aims to discuss both beliefs and will provide supporting ideas to arrive at a reasonable conclusion.
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