Some people think it is better for children to grow up in the city while others think that life is countryside is more suitable for them. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is widely acknowledged that
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the environment
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is important for children`s development. Some people claim that living in rural areas
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more suitable for children rather than
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urban
. I totally agree that cities have more opportunities for younger generations.
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essay aims to explore the benefits of city life and will provide supporting examples from both aspects to arrive at a reasonable conclusion.
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban environment
  • diverse opportunities
  • cultural experiences
  • educational facilities
  • career prospects
  • convenient transportation
  • sense of community
  • natural beauty
  • clean air
  • peaceful atmosphere
  • close-knit community
  • limited resources
  • lack of cultural activities
  • lack of educational opportunities
  • traffic congestion
  • pollution
  • less social interaction
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