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It is a common aspiration among many young people to run their own business, rather than work for an employer. Do you think the advantages of working for yourself outweigh the drawbacks?

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It is true that many youth people start seriously deciding to set up their own
business
 rather than working for someone else.
While
 some people tend to work as employers. I would have to support the idea that running your own career I will explain that below . One of the main positive things to set up your
business
 is that working for yourself no one gives you I hustle.
As a result
, you are going very hard and dedicated.
In addition
, you need to go to work early before anyone arrives. One good illustration of that, is recently my brother set up his own
business
 it is a butcher shop, since that day he started being
different
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 person. So now he is more responsible , a morning person and matures.
On the other hand
, there are a couple of disadvantages to starting your own company.
Firstly
, it is risky for young people the reason why, they did not have much experience in life and work
also
. If they had not done any research about their
business
 in the right way, it would be ended in person.
Secondly
, hard to find someone trusted to invest in their company.
Moreover
 starting something really you love and are passionate about is not a thing
that is
 trendy now In conclusion.
Although
 there is no doubt is are some cons and pros.
However
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 I strongly believe that if you are starting your
business
 you must be a risk-taker and decision-maker and be a leader to successful
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • aspiration
  • entrepreneur
  • flexibility
  • decision-making
  • financial rewards
  • personal fulfillment
  • challenges
  • financial risk
  • invested capital
  • cash flow
  • guaranteed income
  • work-life balance
  • responsibility
  • pressure
  • burnout
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