Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. Discuss both side and give your opinion.

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world, life
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easir
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easier
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computers
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of using
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life
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, you could surf on the
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computers
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are
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become easier
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any
computers
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On the other hand
, using
computers
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in our life . Many people specially
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know
how they can work with
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aspect
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of working with
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and find it difficult to work with it . In
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general
, using
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computers
have plenty
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of advantages
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and
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. I think
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has their own opinion.
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