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Social media is becoming more and more trendy today, what are the advantages and disadvantages of using social media?

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It
certainly
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 true that today social
media
 has become
popular
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 way to communicate among
people
. In
this
 essay, I will discuss the upsides and downsides of
communicate
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 via technology. Regarding drawbacks,
Firstly
, social
media
 can have
a negative impacts
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in
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 individuals.
This
 is because lack of face-to-face interaction, which can
leads
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 to
make
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people
 isolated and
introvert
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.
Therefore
, they can struggle with mental health issues
such
 as
,
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 depression,
anxiety
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and anxiety
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, which can increase
the a
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 chance of
commite
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commit
 suicide among
people
.
Secondly
,
communicate
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communication
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 through social
media
 encourage individuals to adopt
sedentary
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a sedentary
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 lifestyle.
For example
,
people
nowadys
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nowadays
, spend a considerable time in front of smartphones or computers to chat with
people
 without movement.
As a result
,
people
 are more likely to develop serious diseases
such
 as
,
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 obesity, heart attack.
On the other hand
, there are several merits of
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interacting
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modern
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with modern
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 technology. To being with,
people
 can stay in touch with loved ones regardless of
geographically
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 location utilizing technology.
For instance
,
people
 who study or work abroad can use Facebook or
twitter
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Twitter
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 to make
video
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a video
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 call with their families or friends ,
this
 can
contributes
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 to
boosts
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 the relationships among members of society. Another advantage of social
media
 is
environmentally
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an environmentally
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 friendly method
to
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of
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communicate
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communication
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. To illustrate,
people
 can keep in touch with their friends
thorugh
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through
 social
media
 rather than using cars to meet their friends.
Therefore
,
this
 can assist to minimize
the
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traffic congestion
as well as
 carbon footprint ,which contributes to
mitigate
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 climate change and global warming.
To sum up
, social
media
a
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play a key role in modern
live
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,
however
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,however
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 there are merits and demerits of using social
media
.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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