The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
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The chart illustrates carbon dioxide (CO2)
emissions
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per
person
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in four different countries which are the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal from 1697 to 2007.
Overall
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, it has been observed that in the UK and Sweden carbon dioxide
emissions
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have significantly decreased.
Whereas
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emissions
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per
person
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in Italy and Portugal have gradually increased. At the start of the
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the UK and Sweden had an excessive amount of
emissions
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produced per
person
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with around 11 and 9 metric
tonnes
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respectively. Italy produced a considerably lower amount of
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per
person
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which was 4
tonnes
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.
While
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Portugal had the lowest output of emission per
person
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with under 2
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. Despite the steady reduction in
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per
person
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in the UK were the highest in the given
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. Sweden’s production of
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per
person
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surged to 10 metric
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in 1977
then
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plummet to 7 metric
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in 1987 after that it steadily reduced to the end of the
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. Average carbon emission that each
person
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in Italy abruptly rose in 1977 and
then
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constantly increased. Italy’s
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per
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had nearly doubled from the beginning at just above 4 metrics in 1967.
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Portugal at the start of the
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produced nearly 1.5 metric
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but in 2007
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had reached 5.5 metric
tonnes
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matching Sweden’s average.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words emissions, person, period, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbon dioxide emissions
  • per person
  • United Kingdom
  • Sweden
  • Italy
  • Portugal
  • graph
  • compare
  • average
  • increase
  • decrease
  • trend
  • peak
  • decline
  • years
  • period
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