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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

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In most countries,
parents
 and adults tell
children
 that if they
work
 hard
then
 it will become easier for them to achieve any desired goals.
This
 message can motivate them and encourage them to achieve their dreams.
However
, it can cause some advantages and disadvantages.
Firstly
, to boost
children
’s confidence and self-esteem
parents
 always tell their
children
 they can achieve their desire and wants only if they give their 100% effort.
This
 is right because
this
 helps them to be motivated when they follow their passion.
For example
, when I was a kid I love to watch cricket matches but I was afraid to play because I felt that when I do batting. I am not capable of facing baller. I told my
parents
 about
this
 fear and they help me out. I remember they said that there is nothing in the world you cannot face. You have to
work
 hard when you practice.
This
 statement boost my morale and
as a result
, I got selected for my school and college teams as an opener batsman and got a medal.
This
 is why stimulating young people provides them
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 opportunity to embrace challenges and overcome them.
On the other hand
, when
parents
 and adults feed in
children
’s minds to do hard
work
 and everything they will get.
This
 statement
also
 creates pressure on
children
 to do a lot of hard
work
 to achieve their goals. And if they fail in getting it they get depressed. They take stress, anxiety, and anxious about their dreams. In a hurry, they do follow the wrong patch which brings problems for them. In conclusion, it is very easy to say do hard
work
 and achieve what you want.
This
 statement gives a positive impact on
children
 but it has
also
 adverse effects. To overcome adverse effects give clear guidelines to
children
 and avoid unnecessary hope to
children
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • achieve
  • try hard
  • positive mindset
  • self-belief
  • motivates
  • ambitious goals
  • resilience
  • determination
  • confidence
  • self-esteem
  • growth mindset
  • unrealistic expectations
  • disappointment
  • failure
  • effort
  • hard work
  • seek support
  • individual differences
  • abilities
  • capabilities
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