The bar chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying habits in five Australian cities. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
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The bar chart illustrates the data collected in a survey about buying and drinking habits of
coffee
and tea of the residents in five Use synonyms
cities
of Australia in the Use synonyms
last
four weeks.
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Overall
, in most of the Linking Words
cities
except Use synonyms
Adelaide
, people who went to a cafe for Use synonyms
coffee
or tea are higher than the other two categories. Use synonyms
While
in Linking Words
Adelaide
the percentage of those who bought instant Use synonyms
coffee
is slightly higher.
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To begin
with, people who bought instant Linking Words
coffee
in all of the Use synonyms
cities
fluctuated from 45% to 54% which is in Sydney and Hobart respectively. Use synonyms
Although
Brisbane and Linking Words
Adelaide
showed equal percentages in the fresh Use synonyms
coffee
category(34%), the other three Use synonyms
cities
changed by around 40%.
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Moreover
, people in Sydney,Melbourne, Brisbane and Hobart reported 62%,64%,56% and 63% respectively in the segment of going to a cafe for Linking Words
coffee
or tea, which is the highest of them all; Use synonyms
however
, in ,Linking Words
Adelaide
those who bought instant Use synonyms
coffee
category is a bit higher (50%).Use synonyms
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