The bar chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying habits in five Australian cities. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent. Write at least 150 words.

The bar chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying habits in five Australian cities.

Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.

Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart illustrates the data collected in a survey about buying and drinking habits of
coffee
and tea of the residents in five
cities
of Australia in the
last
four weeks.
Overall
, in most of the
cities
except
Adelaide
, people who went to a cafe for
coffee
or tea are higher than the other two categories.
While
in
Adelaide
the percentage of those who bought instant
coffee
is slightly higher.
To begin
with, people who bought instant
coffee
in all of the
cities
fluctuated from 45% to 54% which is in Sydney and Hobart respectively.
Although
Brisbane and
Adelaide
showed equal percentages in the fresh
coffee
category(34%), the other three
cities
changed by around 40%.
Moreover
, people in Sydney,Melbourne, Brisbane and Hobart reported 62%,64%,56% and 63% respectively in the segment of going to a cafe for
coffee
or tea, which is the highest of them all;
however
, in ,
Adelaide
those who bought instant
coffee
category is a bit higher (50%).
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