The chart below shows the amount of time that 10 to 15-year-olds spend chatting on the Internet and playing on games consoles on an average school day in the UK. ...

The chart below shows the amount of time that 10 to 15-year-olds spend chatting on the Internet and playing on games consoles on an average school day in the UK. ...
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The given bar chart illustrates the average time per school day that
students
spend online texting and playing video
games
. Figures are given for
girls
and
boys
between 10 and 15 in the UK. A quick glance at these graphs reveals that
students
tend to play
games
marginally more than chat on the Internet.
In addition
, there is a striking difference between the percentage of
boys
and
girls
playing on game consoles. Looking at the details, 30% of
students
spend from 1 to 3 hours per day texting on the Internet. It is noticeable that nearly 70% of
girls
use the Internet as a means of communication,
while
this
figure for
boys
is only 55%. The opposite trend can be seen in the percentage of
students
playing video
games
. To be more specific, 85% of
boys
get into the habit of playing video
games
and half of them spend 1 to 3 hours on
this
entertainment.
By contrast
, there are nearly 50% of
girls
that do not involve in
games
console and 35% of female
students
devote less than an hour to
this
activity.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, games, girls, boys with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • adolescents
  • chatting online
  • games consoles
  • average school day
  • time allocation
  • social interaction
  • gaming habits
  • internet usage
  • preference
  • daily patterns
  • peak times
  • weekdays
  • weekends
  • gender differences
  • trends
  • implications
  • social skills
  • physical health
  • academic performance
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