Violence in the media promotes violence in society. To what extent do you agree?
Nowadays, violence is being promoted by the
media
in the community.it is not only manipulates
society through different Change the verb form
is not only manipulated
is not only manipulating
media
sources such
as mass media
but also
uses cursing words, targeting women
's physical appearance to just make growth in their business.I completely agree with this
notion and the idea will be elaborated in paragraphs ahead.
The first aspect regarding this
, media
convey inaccurate or misleading information
towards individuals
through newspapers, magazines,television, radio
. Since Correct word choice
and radio
this
types
of Fix the agreement mistake
type
information
media
is used on a regular basis, society's individuals
,
and teenagers are crucially impacted by Remove the comma
apply
this
. There is no doubt the media
business is the source of income for dozens of employees,but to run the business, to get the public review the media
people never miss the chance to modify the real content. Sometimes to get the information
they use the wrong sources.For example
, in the USA fake news frequently becomes widely shared on the internet. Recently in Washington Dc
a real shooting incident occurred , ,Add a comma
,Dc
however
Add a comma
,however
media
spread the wrong information
or try to hide the real content.
The second aspect regardless of this
, media
use the inappropriate and cursing world, which influenced the teenager's mind. As media
attempts the modifying content or upload the wrong incident on the internet, this
way the
violence starts to occur between Correct article usage
apply
individuals
.,Moreover
the targeting women
by Change preposition
of women
an unreal images
of Correct the article-noun agreement
unreal images
an unreal image
women
to spread the news at a fast pace.For example
, recent research reveal
that only 37% of Change the verb form
reveals
women
are represented in an accurate way in any form of advertising. This
way societies and individuals
formed
the wrong shape of a nation because they Wrong verb form
form
influenced
by Add a missing verb
are influenced
media
violation.
To conclude
, although
media
is the main source of information
media
is on the rise to promote violence as well as
manipulate the community.I believe they should have used appropriate methods to convey the information
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