Violence in the media promotes violence in society. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays, violence is being promoted by the

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in the community.it

is not only manipulates

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is not only manipulated

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society through different

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sources

such

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as mass

media

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but

also

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uses cursing words, targeting

women

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's physical appearance to just make growth in their business.I completely agree with

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notion and the idea will be elaborated in paragraphs ahead. The first aspect regarding

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,

media

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convey inaccurate or misleading

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towards

individuals

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through newspapers, magazines,television,

radio

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and radio

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. Since

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types

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of

information

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media

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is used on a regular basis, society's

individuals

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,

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and teenagers are crucially impacted by

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. There is no doubt the

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business is the source of income for dozens of employees,but to run the business, to get the public review the

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people never miss the chance to modify the real content. Sometimes to get the

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they use the wrong sources.

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, in the USA fake news frequently becomes widely shared on the internet. Recently in Washington

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a real shooting incident occurred , ,

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however

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media

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spread the wrong

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or try to hide the real content. The second aspect regardless of

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,

media

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use the inappropriate and cursing world, which influenced the teenager's mind. As

media

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attempts the modifying content or upload the wrong incident on the internet,

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way

the

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violence starts to occur between

individuals

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.,

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the targeting

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women

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of women

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by

an unreal images

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unreal images

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of

women

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to spread the news at a fast pace.

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, recent research

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that only 37% of

women

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are represented in an accurate way in any form of advertising.

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way societies and

individuals

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formed

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the wrong shape of a nation because they

influenced

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are influenced

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by

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violation.

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,

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media

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is the main source of

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media

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is on the rise to promote violence

as well as

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manipulate the community.I believe they should have used appropriate methods to convey the

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.