Violence in the media promotes violence in society. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays, violence is being promoted by the
media
in the community.it
is not only manipulates
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society through different
media
sources
such
as mass
media
but
also
uses cursing words, targeting
women
's physical appearance to just make growth in their business.I completely agree with
this
notion and the idea will be elaborated in paragraphs ahead. The first aspect regarding
this
,
media
convey inaccurate or misleading
information
towards
individuals
through newspapers, magazines,television,
radio
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and radio
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. Since
this
types
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of
information
media
is used on a regular basis, society's
individuals
,
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and teenagers are crucially impacted by
this
. There is no doubt the
media
business is the source of income for dozens of employees,but to run the business, to get the public review the
media
people never miss the chance to modify the real content. Sometimes to get the
information
they use the wrong sources.
For example
, in the USA fake news frequently becomes widely shared on the internet. Recently in Washington
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a real shooting incident occurred , ,
however
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media
spread the wrong
information
or try to hide the real content. The second aspect regardless of
this
,
media
use the inappropriate and cursing world, which influenced the teenager's mind. As
media
attempts the modifying content or upload the wrong incident on the internet,
this
way
the
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violence starts to occur between
individuals
.,
Moreover
the targeting
women
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by
an unreal images
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of
women
to spread the news at a fast pace.
For example
, recent research
reveal
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that only 37% of
women
are represented in an accurate way in any form of advertising.
This
way societies and
individuals
formed
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the wrong shape of a nation because they
influenced
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are influenced
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by
media
violation.
To conclude
,
although
media
is the main source of
information
media
is on the rise to promote violence
as well as
manipulate the community.I believe they should have used appropriate methods to convey the
information
.
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