One of the most recurrently discussed matters nowadays is that the general public ought to properly look after seniors.

One of the most recurrently discussed matters nowadays is that the general public ought to properly look after seniors. It is indubitable that the

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system has prospered over the course of several years.

However

, many people contend that mankind will not have a chance to keep up with the ever-increasing number of

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elderly. In recent times, an abundance of illnesses

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surfaced. These diseases are especially widespread in the community of individuals over 60 years old. In order to prevent the prevalence of sickness, a plethora of technology has been invented.

Although

, some hold a consensus that the equipment is not developed enough. A good case in point is the global pandemic that

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occurred

in 2020.

Furthermore

, even professional doctors could not come up with a vaccine against

this

deadly virus.

As a result

, the proportion of elderly deaths soared dramatically. How the populace should tackle

this

issuance is by improving their day-to-day lifestyle. Without a doubt

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the way of living have a major impact on human beings' health. Not only is it recommended for youngsters to maintain a balanced life, but the older generation should too. By doing that, the commonness of health risks

such

as heart attacks, sugar diabetes, viruses and others can decrease. Being dependent on medicinal gadgets will not be optimal, as no one can confirm that a solution will be detected to stop the nuisances in the near future.

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by taking everything mentioned into account, I deem that if we take matters into our own hands and

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wait for a miracle to happen, society can overcome any presented hurdles