With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper book. Some people see this a good step forward while others not. What are advantages and disadvantages on this trend?

Nowadays, reading
books
on electronic devices
such
as
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and smartphones has been a popular issue for individuals. In
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I will make an effort to explain the pros and cons of the given topic. On the positive side, first and foremost
e-
books
can be carried easily. People Actually can carry dozens of
books
with them wherever they go.
Secondly
electronics
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books
can be accessed in
fraction
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of a second through
use
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of advanced modern technology.
In addition
, they are a lot less expensive and
as well as
eco-friendly, because they do not require any paper.
Lastly
, information
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e-
books
can
be immediately update
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while
in traditional
books
it may take even years.
For instance
, my cousin goes to electronic school and she
carry
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only a tablet with her,
instead
of a heavy bag full of
books
and
this
helps her to have a healthier body. On the downside, recent research has shown that
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spending too much time reading electronic
books
on bright screens, eyesight and body posture definitely get affected.
As a consequence
, people perhaps face several problems,
such
as
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of
neck
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. So printed paper
books
are safe. To illustrate an example, my friend is interested in reading
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a book
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book
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and
she
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every day
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study
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only
e-
books
,
hence
after six years,
unfortunately
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she had to wear glasses In conclusion, from my perspective, the benefits of
e-
books
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