The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework and households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework and households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The diagrams display the percentage of changing electrical
machines
by the owner and the
number
of spending time on house chores in a country between 1920 to 2019
Overall
, the
number
of household
machines
such
as washing
machines
, refrigerators and vacuum cleaners increased. Meanwhile, the
number
of
hours
spent
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doing housework was decreasing per week by that time.
Firstly
, by looking at the first graph shows the percentage comparing households that used electrical devices. In 1920, washing
machines
had the most electrical machine usage at four-tenth
while
other devices used electricity under it. By 2019, refrigerators and vacuum cleaners rose steeply to the top at 100% respectively.
Whereas
, the washing machine fluctuated a little and constantly remained at around 70%.
In contrast
,
while
the
number
of consuming electricity on housework devices increased, the
number
of
hours
spent on house chores was spent at 50
hours
a week in 1920, and it had decreased respectively. Its percentage was
finally
at 10
hours
per week by 2019
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Vocabulary: Replace the words machines, number, hours with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • electrical appliances
  • housework
  • time frame
  • variables
  • trends
  • significant milestones
  • turning points
  • correlation
  • reduction
  • influenced
  • societal implications
  • quality of life
  • gender roles
  • economic implications
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