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Even though globalisation affects the world's economy in a very positive way its negative side should not be forgotten discuss you need to give both the sides and then reach the conclusion the positives and negatives maybe well balanced

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In the contemporary
world
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, globalization has improved immensely. It almost contains whole spots in the
world
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. There is not any path to escape from it.
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, it brings both positive and negative impacts, which will be discussed in
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 stages. On the one hand, globalization affects different aspects of life, which can be useful.
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, it has provided a global village, and because of
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, people all over the
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 can have access to a large amount of information and,
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 they can make communication to make linkages among professionals. Glocalization is another possible result of
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 matter. local businesses can extend their brands by using the global capacity.
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, just like other modern concepts, it is not without any drawbacks.
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 issue, borderlines have lost their meaning.
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, cultures are disappearing every day or cultural convergence is happening somehow, which can be harmful to local cultures, especially to developing countries. They easily have affected by developed countries.
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, small brands can not show themselves in a competitive global market,
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, they will be removed or they will not step into
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 market.
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, all the aforementioned points can bring us to the conclusion that, globalization as a modern concept is unavoidable,
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 it has some adverse consequences, it has helped countries to enhance their capabilities to connect all over the
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, these consequences are balanced, and as a part of society, people have to accept and control them to benefit most. Because everything related to human beings has its own challenges.

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