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You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to accommodation office at the college. In the letter, - Describe the situation - Explain your problem and why it is difficult to work - Say what kind of accommodation you would prefer.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to draw your attention to the issue that I'm having with my accommodations right now. I am Sinan Y from West Block 32nd
Room
 of Gaziantep Ata College.
To begin
 with, I share my
room
 with another student, and he seems to be awake all night listening to very loud music. Even though I was comfortable at the beginning,
however
, it has become difficult to tolerate in the recent past.
Further
, he often has visitors in the
room
, which is quite disturbing.
Moreover
, I am not able to have a good sleep and am unable to concentrate on my studies.
Thus
,
this
 situation is adversely affecting my grades at college.
Hence
, I'm asking you to replace my roommate with someone more considerate or to provide me with a smaller single
room
 because it would be more peaceful that way. Thank you for your consideration. Yours sincerely, Sinan Y
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