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The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think that this will lead to English becoming the only langusge to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?

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Tourism growth has helped
English
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 to become the most famous
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 worldwide. Individuals
suggests
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 that
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 will become the only spoken
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 internationally. In
this
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language
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 worldwide. The
advantages
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 of having
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language
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 globally is that it
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helps to
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 international trade.
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 will be able to import and export goods and services from
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 country to another without having any difficulties in speaking
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English
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language
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.
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, individuals now trade different commodities like television sets, clothes, machinery, food and raw materials.
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, it gives the avenue to strengthen the relations between countries. There is no doubt that speaking
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language
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 globally has
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 to expand the trade for products and services.
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, the negative effects of speaking only
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 in the world
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 now been a threat for some
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, it will cause
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 extinction among
people
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 in the country.
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, it is harmful because
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tends
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 to lose their cultures and knowledge with each lost
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 worldwide. Individuals have difficulty
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understanding their environment, different subjects around them and human cognition. It can
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leads
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 to the loosing of cultural identities.
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, the loss of cultural practices can result
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 reduced social cohesion because an individual’s culture is closely connected to their sense of identity. So it is important to preserve endangered languages. In conclusion,
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 the growth of tourism has helped
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 to become the most important
language
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 in the world. I would suggest that
people
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 should be given equal opportunities to speak the
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 of their choice in order
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 discrimination
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and prevent conflict amongst
people
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 of the country.
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