Nowadays, many people spend less and less time at home. What are the ‎causes of this? What are the effects of this on individuals and on society.‎

Today, in the modern lifestyle, many
people
tend to spend more
time
outdoors rather than staying at home.
This
phenomenon occurs because of some reasons which depend on
people
's activities every day.
This
essay will try to identify the factors contributing to
this
as well as
the impacts that may be caused. One could think of various reasons why
people
today spend fewer hours at home. First and foremost, lots of office work with its rapid deadline from Monday to Friday even at weekends.
Consequently
, these conditions have led
people
to have shorter
time
at home and almost spend the whole of their
time
at the office.
Furthermore
, in the modern lifestyle
people
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spend their leisure
time
hang
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out with their friends
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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