You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The graph below depicts, over 9
years
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, the amendment of 4 wide secondary schools. From an
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perspective, the proportion of pupils attending school begins from the year 2000 to end up with The period of 2009.
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, the schools taken into consideration for
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task have already been mentioned are 4, namely Specialist,Grammar, Voluntary and Community Schools.
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with the first year, it's evident that the highest percentage of 52% is for the case of Voluntary,
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the lowest of 12% is for both cases of Specialist and Comunity. Following 5
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' time, the third school continues to reach the major fraction, whilst ,in the
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year (2009), its process will decrease by 10%. For the other cases
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as Specialist, its rate will always stay on the same line, between 10% and 12%. Grammar will be 24% from the beginning and 19% 5
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later. A particular situation will be for the education program' case, in which its proportion will increase by 46%.
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, with what has already been analysed and compared, it's dominant to highlight that over the
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some of the education will deal with a rise,
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some others will progress always more.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years with synonyms.
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