You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. in your letter •say how you feel about his performance • give details of your musical activities • explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities.

Dear Sir, I am writing with regard to the wonderful RGB band’s recent concert in
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Tower music hall. I would like to thank you for the band’s great performance particularly your extraordinary singing that night. It was one In fact, I play
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for 10 years and
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consider
myself a
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pianist, even so, performing in a concert
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you are the singer is a dream of mine for several years. I would like to send you some of my performances that
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recorded in my private studio, it would be great
you
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listen to them and give me feedback about them.
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Eventually
, your professional opinion could improve my playing would take it steps
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. Thank you in advance, and I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Mohammadreza Ansari.
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