Some people think that government should spend money on railways. Others believe that there should be more investment into new roads. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Any investment in infrastructure will help the
country
and Correct pronoun usage
its citizen
citizen
, that include either railways or new Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
roads
. While
some people
believe that government
must focus on railways ,there are other
Fix the agreement mistake
others
think
that Correct pronoun usage
who think
government
investment should be on new roads
. In this
essay
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i
will discuss both views and tell you why Change the capitalization
I
i
think that investment Change the capitalization
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into
new Change preposition
in
roads
are
better for citizens . It is no doubt true how important railways are for the Change the verb form
is
country
economy and Change noun form
country's
also
transfer , it is one of the critical transport form
because we can take many Change to a plural noun
forms
people
from point
to another and they should not pay much money . Correct pronoun usage
one point
for
instance
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,instance
Suadi
one train could take Add a comma
,Suadi
maximum
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a maximum
300
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of 300
person
in one trip and prevent traffic Change to a plural noun
people
also
decrease carbon emissions . every Correct word choice
and also
country
or government
must spend money on devploment
into new Correct your spelling
development
deployment
roads
not only this
but also
spend
on Wrong verb form
spending
planing
and the way they want their Correct your spelling
planning
road
look
like Fix the infinitive
to look
also
if they would like these
Change the determiner
this road
these roads
road
to contain stores and gas stations or any form of service people
will need . It is understandable that inversment
Correct your spelling
investment
inot
new Correct your spelling
into
not
road
are something necessary when you have Fix the agreement mistake
roads
increasing
in Change the verb form
increased
poplations
, Correct your spelling
populations
population
for example
when a country
would like to attrack
Correct your spelling
attract
attack
tourist
they must have plenty of new Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
road
that can help Change to a plural noun
roads
people
to move around between the cities . Inconclusion
any Correct your spelling
In conclusion
government
should devide
the money Correct your spelling
divide
decide
on
both new and old Change preposition
into
roads
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite