In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. why might this be the case. Do you think this a positive or negativve situation.
There is no doubt that self
house
is very preciouse
rather than living in Correct your spelling
precious
anothers
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another
another's
home
on renting. I believe that is
positive
situation where Add an article
a positive
the positive
peoples
have their own home
. Fix the agreement mistake
homes
This
essay will discuss regarding postive
and negative Correct your spelling
positive
side
with examples.
To Fix the agreement mistake
sides
begine
with, on the positive way, Various Correct your spelling
begin
benifits
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benefits
having
own Change preposition
to having
home
, Firstly
, indivisuals
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individuals
individual
don
not need to pay monthly rent Correct your spelling
do
on
every Change preposition
apply
months
, Change to a singular noun
month
For instance
, Poeples
come to another country for Correct your spelling
people
job
, and they pay Add an article
a job
the job
monthly
amount as rent, as well take extra charge for light bills and gas bills. Add an article
the monthly
a monthly
Furthermore
, If they want to move another
country or cities and Change preposition
to another
thier
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their
house
in
urban areas, Add a missing verb
is in
so
they can earn Correct word choice
apply
huge
amount by giving the Correct article usage
a huge
house
on renting or selling in
Change preposition
at
good
price. Correct article usage
a good
Moreover
, Peoples
will have Fix the agreement mistake
People
right
for making Correct article usage
the right
chnages
in Correct your spelling
changes
thier
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their
home
, if require
, Change the form of the verb
required
Also
they do not nessecery to change again again their home
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homes
due to
low rent or not paid amount
of Correct article usage
the amount
house
, as Correct article usage
the house
result
, Correct article usage
a result
own
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their own
home
is good any
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on any
long term
basis.
Add a hyphen
long-term
On the other hand
, there are few
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a few
drawback
as well, In Change to a plural noun
drawbacks
this
modern era indivisuals motly
like to live in city areas, and Correct your spelling
individuals mainly
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in this
this
urban areas price is Correct determiner usage
these
extreamly
high, which people can not afford, Correct your spelling
extremely
furthermore
, some peoples
have not
stable Add an article
a not
job
, means that peoples
have transfer again and again, and have to change the city or country, it would be not benificial
for own Correct your spelling
beneficial
home
.
To be concluded, The
people should purchase their own Correct article usage
apply
house
, but depended on thier
condition and Correct your spelling
their
job
position, If their job
is long term
in Add a hyphen
long-term
same
location, so should Change the article
the same
be purchase
their own Change the verb form
purchase
home
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