Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In more and more modern society these days. Health is the topic general public's attention.

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some

people

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do not want to eat

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from animals since they would have lots of pros for their's life and the world.

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essay will give some reasons to support

this

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view.

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with, on the one hand, all

people

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like to eat

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and

fish

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.

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, they need proteins from animal

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; The children really need the source

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food

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from

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and

fish

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, it

very

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important for the health

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people

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.

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, most

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favour

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from animals, they are feeling delicious more than when they eat

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or

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.

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, there are many causes say that have lots of benefits when

people

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choose to not eat

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or

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. On top of that,

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and

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are from killing animals

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of humans so some countries believe that does not follow their religious beliefs and morals, from

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idea they do not kill and eat

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or

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, they just eat vegetarian. One important of that

people

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are feeling better about

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their health

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if they do not eat

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, their's stomachs

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feeling comfortable, and they are sleeping well.

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, they look younger day by day when they are eating vegetables, all

people

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do not

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inside their's bodies; Other

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want to keep off diseases so

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they

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choose to eat like vegetarians. In conclusion, from what has been discussed above.

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Some

people

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say that we should choose to eat

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or

fish

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, since some believe that

people

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would have lots of benefits if they have not

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eaten

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meat

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or

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. Favour of each person,

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would have different choices in their's life. The government should have

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consideration for

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issue.