Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In more and more modern society these days. Health is the topic general public's attention.
Although
some people
do not want to eat food
from animals since they would have lots of pros for their's life and the world. This
essay will give some reasons to support this
view.
To begin
with, on the one hand, all people
like to eat meat
and fish
. Firstly
, they need proteins from animal food
; The children really need the source food
from Change preposition
of food
meat
and fish
, it very
important for the health Add a missing verb
is very
people
. Change preposition
of people
Secondly
, most people
favour food
from animals, they are feeling delicious more than when they eat meat
or fish
.
On the other hand
, there are many causes say that have lots of benefits when people
choose to not eat meat
or fish
. On top of that, meat
and fish
are from killing animals action
of humans so some countries believe that does not follow their religious beliefs and morals, from Fix the agreement mistake
actions
this
idea they do not kill and eat meat
or fish
, they just eat vegetarian. One important of that people
are feeling better about health
if they do not eat Correct pronoun usage
their health
meat
, their's stomachs is
feeling comfortable, and they are sleeping well. Change the verb form
are
Moreover
, they look younger day by day when they are eating vegetables, all people
do not fat
inside their's bodies; Other Add a missing verb
have fat
people
want to keep off diseases so the
choose to eat like vegetarians.
In conclusion, from what has been discussed above. Correct your spelling
they
Although
Some people
say that we should choose to eat meat
or fish
, since some believe that people
would have lots of benefits if they have not eat
Wrong verb form
eaten
meat
or fish
. Favour of each person, people
would have different choices in their's life. The government should have further
consideration for this
issue.Submitted by buithuongkt on
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