Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In more and more modern society these days. Health is the topic general public's attention.
Although
some
people
do not want to eat
food
from animals since they would have lots of pros for their's life and the world.
This
essay will give some reasons to support
this
view.
To begin
with, on the one hand, all
people
like to eat
meat
and
fish
.
Firstly
, they need proteins from animal
food
; The children really need the source
food
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of food
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from
meat
and
fish
, it
very
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is very
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important for the health
people
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of people
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.
Secondly
, most
people
favour
food
from animals, they are feeling delicious more than when they eat
meat
or
fish
.
On the other hand
, there are many causes say that have lots of benefits when
people
choose to not eat
meat
or
fish
. On top of that,
meat
and
fish
are from killing animals
action
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of humans so some countries believe that does not follow their religious beliefs and morals, from
this
idea they do not kill and eat
meat
or
fish
, they just eat vegetarian. One important of that
people
are feeling better about
health
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their health
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if they do not eat
meat
, their's stomachs
is
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are
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feeling comfortable, and they are sleeping well.
Moreover
, they look younger day by day when they are eating vegetables, all
people
do not
fat
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have fat
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inside their's bodies; Other
people
want to keep off diseases so
the
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they
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choose to eat like vegetarians. In conclusion, from what has been discussed above.
Although
Some
people
say that we should choose to eat
meat
or
fish
, since some believe that
people
would have lots of benefits if they have not
eat
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eaten
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meat
or
fish
. Favour of each person,
people
would have different choices in their's life. The government should have
further
consideration for
this
issue.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Plant-based diet
  • Chronic diseases
  • Greenhouse gas emissions
  • Deforestation
  • Water consumption
  • Mitigate climate change
  • Natural resources
  • Animal welfare
  • Humane and ethical choice
  • Healthcare costs
  • Sustainable farming
  • Legumes
  • Fruits and vegetables
  • Vegetarian
  • Vegan
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