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People are using a lot of online language translation apps. Do the bene fits of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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With entering the era of globalization, people now have opened endless windows of knowledge around the world, particularly in communication topics. Pre-internet, humans took a lot of time to manually searched word-by-word through a dictionary, learned through
language
 courses, or looked for a translator,
whereas
 now, all of the aforementioned techniques can be simplified with
language
 translation applications.
Conversely
,
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modernization upholds more benefits rather than downsides to education and socioeconomic aspects.
Language
 often becomes the barrier to learning something new from the other side of the world. With a one-stop solution, conveying new foreign knowledge becomes more accessible and efficient for all parties (academics and students). On a day-to-day basis,
language
 mobile
apps
also
 provide more upturns during travel to non-English speaking countries.
For example
, Korean is known to be the most difficult
language
 to learn vis-a-vis their citizens' lack of knowledge of English. With the speech translation
apps
, vacationing in Korea becomes easier; tourists can conveniently capture "hangul" in train stations and immediately record and translate shop patrons. From a socioeconomic perspective,
language
apps
 give direct and indirect advantages to a nation.
Firstly
, a more direct approach is to support global e-commerce transactions between countries. The surge of e-commerce gives
language
apps
 the upper hand in connecting overseas sellers and customers.
Secondly
, the indirect effect can occur in bilateral relationship formation between countries' representatives. One party can easily translate discussions, which may lead to quicker regulations propositions or agreements. With all the benefits taken into account, it can be concluded that the advantages of
language
 translation
apps
 overthrow the disadvantages. Notably, there would be a limited number of global voyagers or stagnant change in economic and cultural exchange if there are not any
language
apps
 created.
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