The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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as well as

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development of

norbiton

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city in future. At

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first glance, we can see that industrial

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is replaced with

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, shops, medical

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and infrastructure It is crystal clear to see that there is considerable change in

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the south side, there is another roundabout

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was built on the river which will connect farmland and housing to the

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area. In the second place, in

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south east

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center

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will be built

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shops will be constructed.

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will be located

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on the far left

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housing,

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there will be

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
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3 paragraphs

127 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

industrial area
planned future development
factories
warehouses
railway line
shopping center
residential buildings
college
mixed-use zone
commercial
residential
educational
green spaces
pedestrian walkways
housing
community
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