The maps below illustrate how Frenton changed from 1990 to 2012.
The maps demonstrate the transformation of a place called Frenton from 1990 to 2012.
Overall
, it nearly changed to an entirely different Linking Words
area
, with a few features Use synonyms
remained
unchanged. Basically, it Wrong verb form
remaining
turnt
into a more modern residential Correct your spelling
turns
turned
area
and was supplied by various public facilities and Use synonyms
entertainments
.
Looking at the eastern part of High Street Fix the agreement mistake
entertainment
first,
the cafe and park located Linking Words
at
the central Change preposition
in
area
were redeveloped into a hotel and golf court. Use synonyms
Subsequently
, they were surrounded by the newly built residential buildings in 2012. Linking Words
Moreover
, the cinema and supermarket at the bottom were changed to cater Linking Words
the
needs of residents which were former theatres and unknown shops respectively in 1990.
Moving on to the western part of Change preposition
for the
High
Street, more stories of flats and a park, which promoted new technology, were added in 2012 after deforestation. Correct article usage
the High
While
the hospital in the middle Linking Words
area
was enlarged, the bank was closed and transformed into an eatery. Use synonyms
Lastly
, the school and library remained unchanged after the new urban planning.Linking Words
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