In most cities and towns, the high volumes of road traffic have become a problem. What are the causes and what actions could be taken to solve the problem?

in
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modern society , the congestion
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traffic in the
most big
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city has
enormous
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problem
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problems
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around the world, the reason is
vehicles
increase rapidly when compare
in
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past . the government should
be consider
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to solve the problem step by step . I will explain the
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statement
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this
essay.
to begin
, All
the
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citizen and all nationality
has
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more vehicle
becaese
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because
their use private
vehicles
owning to their
conveneince
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convenience
instead
of commuting
through
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public transportation to
comparlativley
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comparatively
comparative
is cheaper as well safer.
In other words
, they do not want to take any
risk
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or face adversity during their travelling and to reach
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the
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destination on time.
Besides
, the other causes behind
such
complication could be stray animals who wander on roads and
due to
them
sometime
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the person
get
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stuck in transportation jams.
Also
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there are other factors which have been responsible
since
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many years
such
as ignorance
on
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shipment rules, ramshackle
vehicles
, careless pedestrians etc. The effective possible measures, to make cities and
town's
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traffic–free areas have enlisted below. First and foremost, governments should build sidewalks for pedestrians. So, they may walk safely and do not meet an accident. Another way to tackle
this
obstacle is, the fuel cost must be increased which ultimately
discourage
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people
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utilization
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of their own
vehicles
and
consequently
they are forced to travel either by public
transportations
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transportation
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or share
the
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personal
vehicles
.
For instance
, if two people are living in the same
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and they both are employees of
same
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company
then
they both can go to
office
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by sharing one car or a motorcycle. In conclusion, every person must maintain his scooter in good condition. So that it does not cause any difficulty
while
running and on account of it the speed of other
vehicles
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not (need to) slow down which might lead to gridlock jams.
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