In most cities and towns, the high volumes of road traffic have become a problem. What are the causes and what actions could be taken to solve the problem?
in
the
modern society , the congestion Correct article usage
apply
for
traffic in the Change preposition
of
most big
city has Change the adjective
biggest
enormous
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an enormous
problem
around the world, the reason is Fix the agreement mistake
problems
vehicles
increase rapidly when compare Use synonyms
in
past . the government should Change preposition
to
be consider
to solve the problem step by step . I will explain theChange the verb form
be considered
statment
in Correct your spelling
statement
this
essay.
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the
citizen and all nationality Correct article usage
apply
has
more vehicle Change the verb form
have
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their use private Correct your spelling
because
vehicles
owning to theirUse synonyms
conveneince
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convenience
instead
of commuting Linking Words
through
public transportation to Change preposition
by
comparlativley
is cheaper as well safer. Correct your spelling
comparatively
comparative
In other words
, they do not want to take any Linking Words
risk
or face adversity during their travelling and to reach Fix the agreement mistake
risks
to
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apply
the
destination on time. Change the word
their
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, the other causes behind Linking Words
such
complication could be stray animals who wander on roads and Linking Words
due to
them Linking Words
sometime
the person Replace the word
sometimes
get
stuck in transportation jams. Change the verb form
gets
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Also
there are other factors which have been responsible Add a comma
,Also
since
many years Change preposition
for
such
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on
shipment rules, ramshackle Change preposition
of
vehicles
, careless pedestrians etc.
The effective possible measures, to make cities and Use synonyms
town's
traffic–free areas have enlisted below. First and foremost, governments should build sidewalks for pedestrians. So, they may walk safely and do not meet an accident. Another way to tackle Change noun form
towns
this
obstacle is, the fuel cost must be increased which ultimately Linking Words
discourage
people Correct subject-verb agreement
discourages
for
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from
utilization
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utilising
vehicles
and Use synonyms
consequently
they are forced to travel either by public Linking Words
transportations
or share Fix the agreement mistake
transportation
the
personal Correct article usage
apply
vehicles
. Use synonyms
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, if two people are living in the same Linking Words
areas
and they both are employees of Fix the agreement mistake
area
same
company Add an article
the same
then
they both can go to Linking Words
office
by sharing one car or a motorcycle.
In conclusion, every person must maintain his scooter in good condition. So that it does not cause any difficulty Correct article usage
the office
while
running and on account of it the speed of other Linking Words
vehicles
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do
not (need to) slow down which might lead to gridlock jams.Correct subject-verb agreement
does
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