Some people think that good health is very important to every person, so medical service should not be run by profit-making companies. Do the advantages of private healthcare outweigh the disadvantages?

There is no doubt that everybody demands a healthy body for life, yet some suggest that

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private companies should not give any medical treatments to people. I personally believe that they have more benefits than harm. With regard to the advantages of private hospitals, they dedicate themselves to providing the highest quality of services to their patients because they are usually well-equipped with the latest medical facilities

such

as ultrasound equipment, CT scans and professional human sources.

Moreover

,

this

kind of healthcare sector is able to cater for the personal needs of different patients as they can keep track of one’s health condition, followed by a specific surgery or recovery plan.

Subsequently

, people are more likely to receive medical treatment as soon as possible in commercial hospitals. If they visit public hospitals, they are more likely to wait

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a long queue, especially for organ donation.

Therefore

, it is worthwhile for the community to pay more money for a better experience. Despite the rewarding services provided by companies, it still has some undeniable disadvantages.

Firstly

, the accommodation fee is generally quite expensive which may be unaffordable for low-income groups. It may result in discouraging the public from tackling their illness

due to

financial problems.

Besides

, it possibly widens the disparity between rich and poor people as the latter may think that the rich have the privilege to receive a higher quality of healthcare assistance. Anti-rich sentiments may arise in society.

Thus

, public health and social harmony are severely affected.

To sum up

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it is clear that

private healthcare has both positive and negative sides but I think it still gives a better and worthy medical treatment in general. Private companies may consider subsidising the minority in society in order to tackle inequality.