It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion ? What sort punishments should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour for children?

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very young and they don'

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know what is good or what is bad. Families have a big responsibility to handle

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issue. It is crucial for girls and boys to differentiate between doing right and bad things in their earlier years. If offspring are punished by their

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for the consequences of their behaviour, they learn the differences between good and bad. I with agree

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idea mostly but there are some issues or cases of not punishing kids.

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some behaviours are very dangerous for offspring. If

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do not punish them, kids can be hurt. For ,example if they don'

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wear a helmet

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bicycling they might be hurt.

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personal finance issues; if scion can not control themselves for spending money they can not manage their budget later.

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retribution is a very strong application in my childhood when

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make some mistakes my mother punished me like she doesn'

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allow me to go outside. I immediately learned what is good and what is bad. forfeiture should be very hard if it is hard some psychological problems occur.

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should not make

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violence against

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. retribution must be very light

for example

if the scion does not wear a helmet

parents

or teachers can take their bicycles. If they spend a lot of money they can give less money. ,

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retribution must teach something. İ

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make for just beating. In ,conclusion ,

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all kids are punished for something they did wrong. If

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punish them for their behaviour they might hurt themselves. They can face to face problems later in their life. ,

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abuse must not be tough. It should be applied wisely. If

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want to raise more strong, good children they must punish them.