The pie chart below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries.

The pie chart below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie chart below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries.
The pie chart shows how
wasted
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waste
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products are treated in three different countries and how dangerous it is.
Overall
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, there is a majority of wasted products in Sweden and the United Kingdom that are placed underground.
However
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, in the Republic of Korea, they are mostly recycled. We can see that in the European countries that are here, trash
that is
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placed underground means 55% and 82% in the graph.
Although
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in Sweden rubbish is
also
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recycled and incinerated in 25% and 20%, underground predominance is still really strong.
Moreover
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, in the United Kingdom, there are only 18%
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who
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have other treatments
like
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, like
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chemical ones,
they
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which
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are thrown at sea or incinerated. In South Korea, garbage is mostly recycled. There is 69%
that
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is
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it is
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reused.
Furthermore
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, only 22% is placed below the surface
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, and
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9% is burned. Personally, I think that the recycling method is less dangerous than burning garbage and has more benefits for our society. We can see that there is a different way of treating
wasted
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waste
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products between Europe and Asia.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "that is".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • dangerous waste
  • recycling
  • incineration
  • waste management
  • percentage
  • burial
  • environmental impact
  • strategy
  • comparison
  • significant
  • methodology
  • effective
  • implications
  • trend analysis
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