You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: say how you feel about his/her performance give details of your music-related activities explain how you would like him/her to help you with your music-related activities
Dear Mr Ashane,
I am writing
this
letter in reference to a recent concert I attended in London, and would like to express my feelings about your performance at the show.
To begin
with your performance, I am impress
. The Change the verb form
am impressed
songs
you sang were not easy, because it requires a deep pitch to sing those songs
. Furthermore
, the emotions you were expressing while
singing the songs
, were unique. The final dance act you performed, took me to my childhood days because I used to dance like that in front of my parents at my school concert.
As much as I have enjoyed your performance, I am also
a musician and have my own musical band. I have been singing at parties and concerts since January last
year. I will perform at the “Mega Star Show” in Perth, next year. Moreover
, these days I am working on my first song, and it will be launching in December this
year.
On the other hand
, I consider myself new to this
industry. Therefore
, I would like if you could help me with my voice training because sometimes I find it difficult to sing certain songs
in an appropriate tone. Also
, considering the experience you have, I would like to perform with you in a few concerts, because it helps me to get more experience, which would assist me in my musical journey.
I look forward to hearing from you, and if you need any further
information, please do not hesitate to contact me
Yours sincerely,
Isuru BandaraSubmitted by isuru.cima on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite