The graph below shows how elderly people in Europe spent their free time between 1980 and 2010.

The graph below shows how elderly people in Europe spent their free time between 1980 and 2010.
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The chart depicts how European elderly spent their leisure
time
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(in per cent) between 1980 and 2010.
Overall
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, it is obvious that older people tended to have active behaviour (sports and hiking)
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others chose to experience a sedentary lifestyle (reading, theatre, and surfing the internet) over the period of
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. In regards to the active lifestyle, hiking experienced a dramatic rise compared to playing sports. It stood at 20% in the 1980s,
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happened to be one of the most appealing activities done by seniors in 2010; in which, it hit a peak at 80%.
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, playing sports generally did not show any sharp change during the given
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. Moving on to the other behaviour, surfing the internet was proved as the most popular sedentary activity among the European elderly.
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it wasn't really well known during the 1980s (0%), it
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witnessed a gradual increase during the 1990s period, before rising significantly to 50% in the 2010s.
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, reading saw a sharp rise during the duration, which started at 30% to 60%
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of the period. Meanwhile, spending
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in theatre experienced a downward trend over
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, of which 50% in the 1980s
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fell to 45% in 2010.
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