The graph below shows how elderly people in Europe spent their free time between 1980 and 2010.
The chart depicts how European elderly spent their leisure
time
(in per cent) between 1980 and 2010. Use synonyms
Overall
, it is obvious that older people tended to have active behaviour (sports and hiking) Linking Words
while
others chose to experience a sedentary lifestyle (reading, theatre, and surfing the internet) over the period of Linking Words
time
.
In regards to the active lifestyle, hiking experienced a dramatic rise compared to playing sports. It stood at 20% in the 1980s, Use synonyms
then
happened to be one of the most appealing activities done by seniors in 2010; in which, it hit a peak at 80%. Linking Words
On the other hand
, playing sports generally did not show any sharp change during the given Linking Words
time
.
Moving on to the other behaviour, surfing the internet was proved as the most popular sedentary activity among the European elderly. Use synonyms
Although
it wasn't really well known during the 1980s (0%), it Linking Words
finally
witnessed a gradual increase during the 1990s period, before rising significantly to 50% in the 2010s. Linking Words
Additionally
, reading saw a sharp rise during the duration, which started at 30% to 60% Linking Words
at the end
of the period.
Meanwhile, spending Linking Words
time
in theatre experienced a downward trend over Use synonyms
time
, of which 50% in the 1980s Use synonyms
then
fell to 45% in 2010.Linking Words
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