The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table gives information about the
number
of international travellers in Africa, America, Asia and the Pacific, Europe, and Middle
East in 4 different years.
In general, the Correct article usage
the Middle
amount
of people Change the quantifier
number
went
abroad Correct pronoun usage
who went
keep
increasing from 1990 to 2005. Europe accounted for the highest Wrong verb form
kept
number
of all the period
given, Fix the agreement mistake
periods
whereas
the Middle East has the least figure.
In terms of the total number
, there was a significant rise from 1990 to 1995 reaching more than 100 million
. Subsequently
, the growth was still happening. In 1990, Europe took about half of total travellers which is 280.2 million
and kept rising reaching 400.2 million
at the end
of the period. Although
the Middle East kept rising steadily, it was the lowest number
of change
from 9.8 to 15.8 in 2005.
There was a drop Fix the agreement mistake
changes
of
Change preposition
in
number
in 2005 that Correct article usage
the number
occured
in America. It grew from 1990 up until 2000 Correct your spelling
occurred
then
dropped about
5 Change preposition
by about
million
people.Submitted by sarasaur.sq on
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