The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table gives information about the
number
of international travellers in Africa, America, Asia and the Pacific, Europe, and
Middle
Correct article usage
the Middle
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East in 4 different years. In general, the
amount
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number
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of people
went
Correct pronoun usage
who went
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abroad
keep
Wrong verb form
kept
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increasing from 1990 to 2005. Europe accounted for the highest
number
of all the
period
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periods
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given,
whereas
the Middle East has the least figure. In terms of the total
number
, there was a significant rise from 1990 to 1995 reaching more than 100
million
.
Subsequently
, the growth was still happening. In 1990, Europe took about half of total travellers which is 280.2
million
and kept rising reaching 400.2
million
at the end
of the period.
Although
the Middle East kept rising steadily, it was the lowest
number
of
change
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changes
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from 9.8 to 15.8 in 2005. There was a drop
of
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in
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number
Correct article usage
the number
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in 2005 that
occured
Correct your spelling
occurred
in America. It grew from 1990 up until 2000
then
dropped
about
Change preposition
by about
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5
million
people.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, million with synonyms.
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  • International travel
  • Million
  • Trend
  • Gradual rise
  • Significant jump
  • Technological advancements
  • Increased affluence
  • Globalization
  • Rate of increase
  • Low-cost airlines
  • Ease of travel
  • Tourism promotion
  • Regional differences
  • Cultural exchange
  • Economic impact
  • Environmental concerns
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