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You have bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with your purchase. write a letter to the company that you bought the clothing from, In your email give details of the purchase describe the problem explain why you need a replacement urgently

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Dear Sir/ Madam I have recently bought some cloth from your online shop and after I received them I become aware that there are some inevitable problems that they have accompanied with your products and I am writing to you to enquire about the possibility of replacing them.
Hence
, there are a set of official clothes including a T-shirt and pair of trousers and a pair of shoes that I bought on September 2nd and my order number is 1235468.
Although
 it seems that your products are made with appropriate and high-quality materials
as well as
 their design
that is
 absolutely attractive which can persuade customers to buy after I have tried to put on the trousers that I bought it made me realise that it sounds that a bit tight for me and I could not get
along with
 that.
In addition
,
while
 I tended to get a pair of shoes in black unfortunately your company sent me in white that I do not think so if it is completely suitable for an official ceremony.
Therefore
, as I mentioned before I have to participate in a very specific and formal celebration that will hold in the near future (September 4th) and it may lead to signing the most important agreement that I ever had. So, it would be much appreciated if you could let me know if I can replace inappropriate products as soon as possible by your support team. If you have any questions related to
this
 please do not hesitate to contact me Yours faithfully Amir
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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