The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world.

The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world.
The table illustrates the hectares of forested land in Africa, Asia, Europe, North America Oceania and South America between 1990 to 2005.
Overall
, there was a noticeable trend that the
forest
in most countries shrunk,
while
only two regions had a slight increase in
past
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15 years. Looking at the details, in 1990, Europe had the highest amount of
forest
with 989 million hectares.
By contrast
, there was a fivefold lower in Oceania. After a decade, we can see that only western land has a significant
grow
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in
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around one per cent.
On the other hand
, the amount of
forest
in Africa and South America both dropped imperatively around 40 million. In the
last
year of the report,
although
there was a considerable rise in Asia with 14 million hectares, the area with
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the lagerst
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lagerst
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largest
forest
was in Europe, which still was
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the domination
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of the result.
Finally
, it changed merely in other countries
such
as Oceania and North
Amercia
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America
.
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