The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world.

The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world.
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The table illustrates the hectares of forested land in Africa, Asia, Europe, North America Oceania and South America between 1990 to 2005.
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, there was a noticeable trend that the
forest
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in most countries shrunk,
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only two regions had a slight increase in
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15 years. Looking at the details, in 1990, Europe had the highest amount of
forest
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with 989 million hectares.
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, there was a fivefold lower in Oceania. After a decade, we can see that only western land has a significant
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around one per cent.
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, the amount of
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in Africa and South America both dropped imperatively around 40 million. In the
last
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year of the report,
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there was a considerable rise in Asia with 14 million hectares, the area with
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the lagerst
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lagerst
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largest
forest
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was in Europe, which still was
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the domination
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of the result.
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, it changed merely in other countries
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as Oceania and North
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America
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