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On a daily basis, a great amount of food is being wasted away. What are the possible causes and what will be the solutions?

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In today's world, one of the most concerning issues is the production of
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waste
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 which is reported to be in an increasing trend day by day. There are some reasons to pose
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 problem. In
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 essay, I will discuss some of the main causes and their feasible solutions. one of the main reasons is consumerism which has become a common feature of the modern world in many aspects. Nowadays, many people tend to purchase more than they require, and the amount of consuming single-use products has risen in which half of the goods would end up making
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 the leftover
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 would be thrown away
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 of distributed among guests or preserved
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to use later. The second under laying cause would be that people are not fully aware of how to conserve perishable goods and ingredients. What I mean is, they do not read the structure of preservation which is written on the package or do not investigate the protection. To illustrate, they might put a product in a moisture and hot space which should be maintained in a dry and cool place.
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, that would spoil and decay after a period of time. One possible solution is to educate people to consume the adequate amount of
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 they require.
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, we can teach them to supply fresh goods from daily organic markets
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 of buying a pile of them all together and letting
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 spoil or rotten in their fridge. Another option is that manufacturers can lengthen the expiration date of products which may lead to less litter and
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. What is more, they can adopt more beneficial approaches in manufacturing crops. Applying
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 additives is a good illustration of
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 which may shorten the time of decomposition.
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,
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waste
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, as mentioned, can be caused by many other probable factors.
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, both government and the public are responsible for
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 issue, and with their cooperation, we can take immediate actions to tackle
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 problem.
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