The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advance technology which can prevent and solve crime do you agree or disagree.

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which helps many countries to

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devices help to provide

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environment for people. To being with, there are several reasons why I believe that

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the rates of

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there are have been cameras installed in order to deter people to commit offences, which

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people think twice before engaging in any illegal behaviour.

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, cameras record and help police to catch criminals after the

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occurred.

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the number of crimes dropped

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dramatically

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before happened.

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helps investigators to solve

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blood or fingerprints of criminals and

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via DNA or smell, which can make

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criminals.

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, it is easier to trace the offenders and

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catch them and provide them

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punishments. In conclusion, it seems to me

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including,

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the rates of

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and

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society from violence.